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Dontliefeeding me linesleading to piles of shit.Dontvex memussing my hairthen patting me down.Dont patronizespooning out sugarto sweeten your blows.I am notyour dollyour sweetyour darlingI am...
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Lori, Wow! For a minute I thought it was another person. Whatever the reason you wrote this at the time it certainly was a fantastic expression of anger. I know many women would know what you meant...
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I'll have to turn out my drawers if I can find work like this. Very powerful stuff. This is the second vexatious one of your I've read this week.
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Cool vent, Etain!Sometimes, you just need to let those feelings out...~ Bruce
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wonderful write, yes very powerful indeed.....ahh but how we can all be pressed into that corner.....then all hell breaks loose--great write. ali
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What grabs me about this is the shift in pattern and mood that happens suddenly after the third stanza, and again just before the last 4 (5) fractured lines. I almost feel your finger jabbing in my face
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Lorraine, Teagan, Bruce, Ali, and Pags - Thank you so much for your responses, all. I appreciate your taking the time to read and respond. *bowing*
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WOW!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!A moment of clarity..perfectly captured..and powerfully expressed, my friend...excellent stuff!blessed beSash xx
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Thanks, Sasha. I don't even remember which bastard this was directed at - there was a whole string of losers marching through my life for a period!!
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Very well said - I hope that one of the bastards - all of 'em - see this poem.:-0
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Congratulation's Etain,very powerful word's well said,and I know exactly where you are coming from,well done..
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what else can I say, E .that has not been said by everyone.but quite know the feeling.rumaging in files can give surprises,and reflections of what was. did I really write that? R.
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Right you are! I cannot BELIEVE what I've found in these boxes. It feels good to clear out the past and make room for a new future...
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Interesting the things we never get round to posting anywhere and suddenly there they are. What a poem!! Deep feelings. Love this. Theneva's DeviantARTThree keys that unlock thoughts: drunkenness,...
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Thank you, Kathy. Some of what I've uncovered has been rather eye-opening - I'd forgotten certain things and it might have been best to leave those memories in the past...
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